Performance Practice Project: Advantages

I believe my best part of this project is my final ten seconds when the lyrics start as well as the guitar riff. I believe up until then my piece is dull and unattractive to watch, however when the lyrics begin I begin cross cutting editing and movement within the band.
This highlights my strong points and can work well within my actual project however I need to work on creating more interesting shots for instrumental parts otherwise my entire project would be affected.